I read The Publication of Your Personal Profile. The paraphrase I found is the research about how many workers of the same company would give out information about their private lives to someone they did not know at the fourth paragraph. The author presents this material to illustrate the point view given in the third paragraph-people such as teachers and potential employers can easily gain access to their students' or employees' profiles. Moreover, this example specify the view to the point that the employers can access to the profiles of employees even if it is restricted. The reason the author uses the material in this is because this resource does have real comment of somebody, but just involve a experiment and it can be present clearly through paraphrase.
The quotation I found is that J. Sunden, author of Material of Virtualities notes that Myspace and Facebook are a way in which people can "type [themselves] into being"...It explains the fact people display themselves and scrutinize others by typing something on the website, without communicating face-to-face, which causes more serious consequence of privacy being leaked. The reason why the author use quotation is that the saying, "type into being" is J. Sunden's unique expression about communicating by typing, which is more individual and vivider.
These two materials intervened in essay provide appropriate evidence to certain context and content and make the point of view more arguing and more persuasive.
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